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Old 03-26-03, 02:23 AM   #6
Orikle
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Yeah Enigmatic this shits aiight, rhyin was there but it was inconsistent at times which threw the flow out in patches. It's a good topic but there was something that threw me off a bit where you like contradicte yourself with these two lines..

It's hard on the streets no money, no car, blisters on my feet//

Then u said

Runnin' money and drugs//

Maybe I'm missin somethin but to me, you jsut pretty much contradictin yoself here dawg, just put it all together better next time, look at everly line u write, up your vocab and shit will be alot better!

Peace Out Yo!!!!
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