yo, that was loooooong.... I can tell you ain't too good yet, but it was a'ight... the flow was pretty good thru-out, the vocab need improvement, I noticed alot of elementary words... the record scratch thing was kinda wack, and some of the bars could've been structured better... I'm-a give you a 4/10.. I know that's not good, but yo, keep practicin' you're about as bad as I was when I started.... peace..

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