This battle wasn't iLL.... Amend has nice flow it could be great if he got on a more experienced site & battle the big boys.... & that decoration shit is not cool ex. ' '

Rich N.I need to work on using multies... u're flow is very simple



~When You Go To 'Check In' ~ Just Wave-It-'Bye'...
Ya Chances Are More 'Slim' Then An Asians-Eyes//

played

~I Would 'Son This Kid' ~ But He's Like 'Twice-My-Age'...
Even At 'FlamingText.com' U Couldnt 'Ignite-The-Page'//

played again

For Better Or Worse? ~ Never Expect To Ever Clap-Amend...
I Didnt Battle U For The Challenge ~ Just To Laugh-Again//~

nice shit.

RICH

you need to take a time out, worse then her .. damn your a hurb!!
your X Marked the Spot, then she Kicked your ass to the Curb//

Played

...Amend, im about to teach you to stop and watch your jaw
as IRAQ ur brain with more Shots than all of Shock and Awe//
dawg your not that raw, an over-rated fake vet.. gets no respect
not a Threat, left his PM's unanswered like he Called Collect//
let us not all forget, how his Ex kept w/ requests for assistance
am i battling Her or Him?? forget it... it makes No Difference//
both suck dicks w/ persistence, my Kids played Tag inside her Mouth
used YOUR name when she Signed In & looks like she never Signed Out//

first 2 lines flowed nicely... but the 2 didn't make any sense

3-4 lines were wack & played

5-6 were filler

This battle could have been better

Vote= Amend aleast he had one nice line... this battle was aight... no dissing u two,, just stating the facts...this battle was not ill...