yeh this shits pretty tight. the only thing is that ur attitude dont match with the topic. youre talkin bout war and the struggles that victims and casualties go thru, but from listenin to it u would think it made u happy. it sounds like u should be rappin about how happy u are about some new girl u just met, more then war and death. lyrics are ill tho. keep it up.
. . . sounds like lauren hill in the chorus . . .
return the favor . . .
Mind Theory - God's Breath
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35586
Remesis and Vain ft. Mind Theory - Off My Chest
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34721