good drop, decent -intentions- the only problem i found was some of the line breakes [ where u say sumthin then set up the ryhme] contradicted the begining of the sentence or the next ryhme to the leader didnt match up right, you prolly coulda made a triple or quad ryhme but it werked, i can hear the type of beat u had in mind kinda like " aint no party like a west side party" good drop mane, elevate, but still a good drop