|
Fern Gully
|
IP:
aight....
Even Minded :: lines i felt
::I got my own Mind, Theory n I won't suggest to bet the newbie
You speak and I hear 'blah blah blah' like friends of Snoopy::
^^haha...you had me dying with this line
::Not a Jedi but I heard for Mind's Tricks it's pretty cheap
Fuck your soundclick links kiddie...I don't need ya silly beats::
^^^haha at his sig....great personal
Mind Theory :: lines i felt
::You claim you're "Even"-minded, but look at the "odds" your facing/
My words will put ya rep to a end, like my patience//::
^^ i liked this opener...it rhymed enough to word and a hot play on his name
::
I'm like a "soap opera", I'll have you wet at the eyes/
Cause your time on earth is numbered, like the "Days of Our Lives"//
"As the World Turns", words "cut", like the "finishing scene"/
You need to give ya style "change", like a "vending machine"//::
^^^interesting 4 bars usin soap opera similies....could be hotter if there were harder pucnhes in there....
pretty even battle...the lines that i put down were put because the rest of the verse didnt really stand out...there were a lot of fillers and <in my opinion> some flow issues....for even i didnt like the opener...ill give you props for keepin pasta in mind the whole time but it wasnt really a punch...for mind the fellatio line didnt really stirke me as any kind of punch...the pattern seemed to be off...
this was a pretty even battle...but im voting for Even Minded based on consistency and harder punches...
__________________
Knum- Sayins???
Keepin It Real Dumb
The Creation
We Dont Need A Fuckin Crew Forum! Kost
|