not bad, obvious topic that needs voicing... you pro'lly could've come across a little stronger, up the impact a little, you were using pretty generic analogys... "saddam will use any means necessary to ward off defeat/
he has invisible weapons made underground away from the heat/"... not an analogy but pretty basic vocab... I'm not at all say'n it isn't good, 'cause it is pretty tight, I'm just telling you how it could've been better... peace..

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