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Old 03-27-03, 03:36 PM   #14
Narcicyst
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From: confined in the mazes of my mind
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that was a tight drop...i liked how you created a visual landscape thru words i like that shit in a rhyme...the vocab was nice, the topic was illness and original...

Unsheathed I decapitate those at close range
Using body as shields I finish those who caused pain
The rain is getting harder I feel myself slipping
The halls drenched in blood and my awareness is missing


i like those bars they nice...anyways keep spittin god...one
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