^Yea, that's what I was going to say and no one is saying you don't know what you're doing they're just telling you what you need to do to make it easier to read. You have nice lyrics and content but the set up is wrong. Pushing enter will let people know where to stress a rhyme and improve the flow they're reading. But other than that you have nice lyrics and from what I could tell a decent flow. Keep elevatin...

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