i wasnt feeling this...you need to work on structure..loose the /'s and pic a topic other than "im the dopest,dont fuck w/me" cause this didnt prove that...like i always say..dont say you are iLL, prove it..get me? anyways most of these lines were played, put your shit into bars, not just a big paragraph it is too hard to read, and kills the flow for me....keep writing and just try to elevate...

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