this was wack..one of the less talented pieces ive seen
write about something that isnt used repetedly that every single
cat is writing about...it isnt dope shit yo....i advise you to stop writing this bullshit...think of something on a higher level..get a message across....
learn how to spell..mispelling words in text is not a good thing..a sign of a gramatically challenged emcee...reflects poorly upon yourself.....
plz try to elevate..plz
your flow..structure..content..spelling..vocab..everyth ing in my view needs elevation..loose the /'s i think we can tell the bar ends w/out them...

~2~