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my dreams are painted in black, by my somber emotions;
so many tears shed, now i'm the God of these oceans;
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i was feeling those lines yo..shit was hott...not sure if it would be the audio type, structure wise and shit....but yo this piece was madd creative and detail was crazy as fuck...i was loving this, keep me wanting to read each new line....you got talent... maybe some more internal rhyming and shit would have been nice..but that wasnt a big factor yo..the concept and imagery made this iLL straigt up...good shit yo..keep it up
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