well i liked the peice, it had meening, since i dont know you, and alled you dogg earleir i tried to find your gender from this, its prolly female, but there were ssome masculinly used word, insane, and such, but off he gender subject, i liked your peice it was tru, these are the type i like, songs telling a story

good job, 8/10 [ only cuz when there r alotta multies in the beggining it draws my attention away]