Now that I'm not crying I think I'm gunna take a second stab at this. haha I keep coming back to read it so I might as well. First of all, sometimes elaborate vocab means shit. And everyone coming in here to mention how 'simple' it is, should remove their fucking thesaurus from their ass. Honestly, I think over-wording woulda taken away from the honesty and straight up 'THIS IS HOW IT FUCKIN IS' quality of your verse. I saw your life in those words....got a sense of what you feel and how hard it is and....DAMN kid, I wanna come save you my fuckin self. Definately my favorite read of the day.

ps. last time I checked I was still a girl haha