damn yo, you got like the same life as me, only I don't do crystal.. I do way too much E, got a 5 month old son, and I ain't even like my girl anymore... shit dawg, I was feelin' this the whole way thru.. trust I know what it's like.... and as for the rhyme itself, the flow fell at times, but other than that it was like perfect.. I totally agree with deception that longer more complexly-worded bars would've really taken away the heart of the rhyme...

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