This drop was very emotional, makes a nigga wana cry.
great use of words in this piece, everything flipped correctly.
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her sobs were low and only the walls could hear.
in her room alone her mind was scattered and unclear.
what happened here she felt pain were she couldnt bear.
tears encased her face and fears were eyes that stared.
no one cared or noticed let alone asked what happened.
only saw her eyes with the waters and handed her the napkin.
behind backs they were laughin' if only they knew what happened.
it was a stormy day and my mother was out of town.
my father was at work i listened to rains solemn sounds.
as drops hit the ground i sat intensely nervously itchin.
dreading the sound of my fathers diesel trucks engine.
for the tires schreechin and his headlights blinking.
for my father wasnt at work. the bastard was out drinking.
i sat thinking wondering debating how he would hold his actions.
fuck the people laughing. for this is what sadly happened.
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great opener, really was.. i read it all and as i kept reading it, it drew me in wanting to read till it was finished, Night. i gotta hand it to you, you layed down a very good drop here son. 10/10 keep up this good shit look forward to reading more of your master pieces.