First cat flowin to the beat, beat is aight, quality not bad, Id just say more emotion, maybe more inners in ya rhymes since its a slow rap cuz itll sound better and make you sound faster..Not a bad drop

Fill- Comin in..Nice flow, decent voice, lil better flow and rhyme scheme is more to my liking, both were nice...ridin beat nicely..lyrics are nice too, definately a nice drop.. Im really likin beat..what is it?

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Good drop

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