this was horrible and i dont mean the rhyme but the feeling u conjured up inside of me. serious this really affected me u got down exactly the right feeling for a sick topic like this. the rhyme was good but to be honest cos of the topic i felt like i was reading a newspaper account or sumthin. but serious this is a tight piece hope it dont get slept on. No real criticisms ya vocab was aight and the flow was nice in general.