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Originally posted by kmfrob
it was quite nice but to be honest the "ation" thing got borin after 4 lines. but ya points ya got across were good and i could actually see a meaning behind most of ya bars. flow was sumtimes choppy but generally good. anyway check mine shinobi life aight peace
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i agree with this guy, seems like there;s not as much effort cuz anyone can easily go on a rhyming dictionnary site and get 100 words that rhyme the same and put them in a rhyme, seems like it was all vocab and no sense to it