i didnt liek the first one it was to elementry.
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Look at you with your hot multi rhyme line bro!
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those aint multis multi doesnt mean rhyming more then one word in a line, multi is multi syallable rhymes
the second one was alot better
"I rob niggas like kazaa,wanna-be bad boys Want tha Shyne But like Miami i Got em Locked-up/"
this line had a nice concept but it didnt flow that good
'niggas all bluff bout shit like sadaam knowing they ain't got it/
Fo making me think it I Play bush and Go ta War wit em fo tha fuck of iT/
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this was a ok bar, just dont like all the wit fo ta tha bull shit, if it wasnt full of that it would be better.
check out mine "one of my verses"