It' pretty good for basic stuff...every thing was in tha right places...and that's good basics but elevation gets beyond tha basics...It uses tha basic as a platform to leap off of and expand on...this rhyme is full of fillers but it's ok because it sounds right...
but its not anything profound...answer this: Out of a ship and a submarine who has tha deeper knowledge? An what about now if they argue? you see that's a level you need to get too. It's like explaining Shakespeare to a dog, he'll look at you but never understand you...peace, keep it moving...