hmmm . . .
Spry went 8 lines over the bar limit.
Billy went 19 minutes over the time limit.
Not considering the fact that you both basically disqualifyed yourselves, Billy took this battle with more punchlines and better flow.
::No metaphors, no wordplay, or punchlines/
Kid its crunch-time im separatin your lines like a fire drill at lunch-time/
::Your brain must be like a robbed register, its senseless/
did you jog on your paper cause your wrote alot of run-on sentences/
Billy beat your whole battle with just these lines.
::he fucked a guy named marty, and blamed it on the bacardi
I can almost swear on my life I heard that line before somewhere, but I have no proof so don't sweat it.
::fuck you billy, and fuck a punchline
i don't need IT to win, i can end this with a ___________
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^nice concept, but unfortunately its not true. You do need punchlines to win battles, cause thats what battles are.
Alright rhymes Spry. No punches. Alright flow. To many homo references.
Keep it up y'all.
Return the favor please, and both of you vote on my battle with Rtikulate:::::::
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35971