ooohh...I see many holes in your verse so you fill 'em with curse...
why is it always a rookie without some sense that be fillin' a hearse?
If you held your flyest words by gun to disperse...
against me.... they'd be tellin' ya "man, shoot me, you go first!"

yo it'd be a slaughter...rook have some sense...if you want some advice, I can advise you...until you'll be one of tha best in here but don't over step your linez...It's fine if in self-evaluation you know where your place is...tha point is to move up, that's what critique is for...keep rhymin' you'll get there.