Dope Beats . . . period.
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I give my vote to Chrit, he had some really nice punches.
::you'll be catching more slaps than E Honda's cheating wife/
::cuz winnings an adhesive, and I stick to what I'm good at/
^^nice . . .
fgee, its looks like you got ideas, but you need to work on how you structure it into a verse and on how it flows. work on coming up with more complex punches, also.
::rip your 'balls' off then make u 'swallow' ur 'pride'
^^nice
all the others coulda been stronger.
get rid of all the excess filler
good battle ya'll.
keep me in mind if you see me battlin someone in the threads and vote on my shit. pz.
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