yo this is part of a song Im workin on
cant come up with a decent hook tho
so if u guys have any suggestions I would appreciate it



I teleport this rhyme outta my mind into my pad/
to reveal the secrets I never had/
when I spit you freeze/
then I drop kick your fuckin knees/
"Fatality, Flawless Victory"/
follow me as I sing, as I lead/
you to your fuckin doom with deep and complicated shit like/
the pencil to led to pen-soul to blood-red/
to superhuman strength in my muthafuckin head/
with my x-ray vision/
I see thru the dillusion you've hidden, Ive written/
pages with out physically touching anything/
only doing it mentally, you fuck with me/
Ill kick your ass like POW!/
BANG!, KAZOO!, and WOW!/
NOW sound baloons/
are runnin rampant like BOOM! BOOM!/
this storm of words is lightning and verbs/
raining metaphors to bring towers to curbs/
slowly destroyin' the earth/
backwards, like death to birth, last to first/
I know it hurts to hear my curse/
I write like a spectre/
intangible, invisible/ like Hannibal Lectar
my words trick you to eat you to consume your soul/
ca'lear my throat/ *ahem*/
I rap so rapid I cant stand still/
at best Im jitter'n, the ink is sizzlin'/
'cuz my letters are hotter then/
a Sahara porn set with Shakira fuckin' Salma Hayek/
ramblin' like a psychotic psychic/
thinkin (whispers) "chaos, chaos, cause a riot/
why not try it", jump off a building and fly like I did/
put acetate in your pupils to incinerate your eyelids/
but the again you just might shoot lasers out your cornea/
Im warning ya/
my lines are so powerful that when I speak its so unspeakable that its deplorable/
these words arent durable/
they're invincible, immortal/
to live forever/
Im so smart Im no longer clever/
five levels above the highest level/
so why am I gettin judged by rappers that fuckin suck/
4 outta 10 my fuckin nuts/
anyways Im here to rule again/
strikin' fear into the hearts of villians, its Super Hooligan/