im gonna write a hefty reply cause i know you gonna get slept on... first of all this was mad long... shorten your drop... if its good and people tell you to drop more verses... then feel free to drop something this long... i stopped reading somewhere 1/4 of the way through it... nothing really urged to me keep reading... your bars took forever to get to the end... it did flow when you needed it but i had to look over some of it twice to get the rhymes... you need to elevate on your content too... i give this a 6/10... keep rhymin