hmmm . . . good battle . . .

::Cause I'll have u walk in 'rooms with ceiling clocks' just to prove that ur 'times up'//lol

::Let the fighting erupt; kid must be 'delivering testicles', cause he's 'driving' me 'nuts'//

::Experience the worst pain as I use 'pennies to carve ur optics' just to have ur point of 'views changed'//


^^NICe


::i'll cut your ass up like the reaction from a bounced cheque//1

^^ good concept, could have been worded better

::I'll post you out till you are dead worse than Mind Theory freeposting in this thread//6


^^ lol, thats the only way I ever get any votes in my battles

Quik Spit this is much better then ur other stuff I've read.

theres is still a little bit of filler in there . . . but big improvement . . .


both could use help in flow and structure

but overall I have to give my vote too . . . Mic Check . . .


but nice improvement Quik Spit, much more metaphors and punches and less filler. Keep em comin.

thanks for votin on my battle too.

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