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Old 03-30-03, 07:40 PM   #29
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1. Calm the fuck down.
2. I'm doing my job, don't get your panties in a bunch. If you don't like it..well tough.
3.

I'm gonna start with I usually don't like story telling, I dunno, its just not something I'm into. ...but illness is illness none the less.
The perplex imagery throughout this was just fucking amazing.
I thought the ending was good, I thought you would have made it better through describing his death more vivadly, but its all good. So basically the ending was the only part I wasn't loving 100%..but the rest...the rest I did.
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