first off welcome back, dime. long time no see. this is joe terrify from backs in the day!! jus hollarin, ya bored aim me @ evilbombsquad. ya first verse had an emotional ride. that im feelin in away but on a diffrent level. next verses ya dropped your emotions were way more personal. not really trying to re-read your peice to ya. just lettin ya know i read it. ya imagery brought a clear picture of your content threw out the peice.

stayup

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