aight home boy look rap bout stuff you would neva rap bout not drugs and dumbs shit like dat thats wackas a bitch first of all your ends should rhymes with your middle word

example:
you skills need help or to be shown the way<(middle word),
they will never evole so they need to be thrown away<(end word)//

see you should also make your bars two line instead of one its easier to read aight remember use bigger word creat punchlines use multis you do know what they are right and make sure you ahve word play and metas aight pm me and ill explain therest holla