I liked this...

...it had it's own kind of complexity to it...and even though at times seemed a bit too blunt....overall, the bluntness of it seemed to be part of the piece...giving it that hard hiting effect if you would...

...also very raw, which i tihnk was right to do (leaving it this raw that is)...as it got the person reading more into it...it allowed the overall jist of the piece to have it's desired effect..

..respect...