Okay, even though this was probably from the heart and close to you...

...and i could feel someof the emotions being depicted, they were most def apparent on occasions....

..but overall felt this piece was a bit too over elaborate, it's a topic that can at times seem 'played'...and even though you tried to tackle it in a personal and slightly original way, i felt it just quite didn't come off....

..still, had it's moments...

...respect...