too short but im well feelin ya on the topic (me bein white an all) but nah i wanna see more asian rappers. mountain brothers were hot but never got the proper respect they deserved. I been in Japan workin for the last 6 months and even though 90% of J-rap is shit theres sum tight groups out there like Tha Blue Herb, Shing09 and ofcourse Krush but they aint ever gonna get any respect (except for Krush) cos they Japanese. As for this rhyme it was simple but it flowed nicely. ya vocab was quite nice but just try and mix it up and throw in some more multies. anyway check mine shinobi life aight peace.