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Old 03-31-03, 01:49 PM   #3
kmfrob
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that was a nice little drop cuz. Wat ya sayin is so right its a shame

Accepted gladly by death wishers, who use a knife//
To stick and slit they wrist in suicide//
Most of them cats back illin' in Hell//
"Thou shalt not steal", these fools steal from themselves//
Take their own body and dignity, living as felons//
Like Bobby and Whitney, sold their ticket to Heaven//
For crack to sniff, the statistics pattern shifts//
'Til the hardship of being broke when young and alone is just a myth//

Ya vocab was quite nice and it all flowed but ya def need sum more multies just to mix it up a bit. still nice piece. 8/10 check mine shinobi life aight peace
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