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Old 04-01-03, 12:21 AM   #7
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Avalon:

Besides he's right, Av's not on his level, Kid is a rebel,
But that's kinda like sayin Mandy Moore is the devil...

i liked this line of you verse the best- most of you punches were somwhat strong, and you had a good flow.

T Pound:

I can't find anything that I really liked about your verse (no disrespect) but heres an example of what I didn't like:

fuc a gat..i could make this fake cat tap witha slap//

your punches seemed really undelevoped. You should have put more time into this verse.

-Just a word of advice to to Pound (no disrespect):
try building a better structure around your rhymes, and it will help the voters catch the flow you are going for, it will also help with punches in the long run-------

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