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IP:
Avalon:
Besides he's right, Av's not on his level, Kid is a rebel,
But that's kinda like sayin Mandy Moore is the devil...
i liked this line of you verse the best- most of you punches were somwhat strong, and you had a good flow.
T Pound:
I can't find anything that I really liked about your verse (no disrespect) but heres an example of what I didn't like:
fuc a gat..i could make this fake cat tap witha slap//
your punches seemed really undelevoped. You should have put more time into this verse.
-Just a word of advice to to Pound (no disrespect):
try building a better structure around your rhymes, and it will help the voters catch the flow you are going for, it will also help with punches in the long run-------
Vote: Avalon
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