good drop son, ur shit was intense the style is easy to follow, but the statements rnt, i can tell that wasent prewrite, cuz if you had time to think about it, that sit woulda made more sense first 1/4 soli grea shit, 2/4 varied 3/4 eh, maybee 4/4 just off, i dunno abot alla that higher knowledge shit, any way

peep life and times of an mc its heart felt and deep
peep heart poured out, self exclamitory
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return the favor niggaz, chances r i critiqued yours