Yo man this is pretty nice but WAY too long for Open Mic dogg!!!! It will probabaly get slept on for that reason and u have got slpet on already.. but the lyrics and rhymin were all good, I only read half coz its a thesis haha but what I read was good, keep elevatin man....

Peace Out Yo!!!!

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