im not to ambitious, sleeping on hopes and wishes
dreaming of fictious bitches & enormous riches

why do you dream of that? nice opener for this.

this list cuts deep, slices that require stiches
i miss much sleep, life is just nerves & twiches

i dont know what the list is. nice rhyme pattern though.

gone in the blink of an eye, lids open wide
try to see what i missed, ignorance is my guide

very nice. i like this one.

pissed, still can't figure out why im alive
must have enless lives, inside i die all the time

brilliant. really fuckin nice!

my life is a line & it ends at every sentence
im not who im suppose to be, its pretend for the senses

sort of fell off the level of those last 2 bars.

skin & expressions are just apolstery
concealing the real me and all my guesses

falling off.

hard headed, forget it and dispose of all the lessons
even though i know the answers before the questions

picking it up again. nice rhyme pattern.

what should i do? im accepting any suggestions
i cant live this life any more, bored w/ routine
headed nowhere fast and im picking up steam
a one man banned, played out loud in this dream

yes you got it again. fucking nice!

there's no I in team, and it seems im the outcast
so sure of myself but real quick to doubt fast
only Rich by name, i know nothing about cash

ohh! i love this shit right here^

no flash of the stash, just change for the bus
i dont believe Myself, how the fuck can i Trust?
headed for Dust To Dust, just to get swept away
cant make sense of my life, yet i continue to pay
how can tommorow be brighter when its always today

EXCELLENT ENDING! really nice!

nice job Rich. This verse may have fell off a little bit but it kicked it self up like a son of a bitch. very nice. im hoping to see more stuff like this in the future.

ps.

peep . the disease . if you happen to have time. thanks man. very good.


9.7-10

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