yo it was aight, flow wasnt reall good but i still got it..i think some of your lines were like not making sense.. for example

carefull care, I'll maul you like a bear in a chair so beware
I'd like to eat a pair, how come all cops do is stare?

haha didnt really see a point in this .. except to rhyme, dont just rhyme to make it rhyme.. make sense with it.. keep spittin though
peace out...