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Originally posted by Evolve
To be honest i really wasnt feeling this battle... Shanks, i thought you could have came alot harder.... It looked like you were trying to hard to use Multies but you forgot about the Punches...
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I looked thru Shanks verse 3 times trying to find a line that had a punch I could quote . . .
Shanks tight punches:::
. . . *yawn* . . .
Quotients tight punches:::
::. . Cause I've never smacked someone so much. . like I'm an out of work Pimp/
::. . The only way Dirt could double me. . would open my post and split the screen/
Shanks Wack/Played "punches" . . .
:::: Mind check'em wit fine lines, reck'em like timed rhyme mines!::
leave him blind, like crooks wishin' ta find books for competition!!::
duke can't cook unless he look's at what he's missin' for hook's!::
now I'm fishin' this bitch that took tha bate and switched positions!!::
he fake wit an alias, a Jake tha Snake that take's away ya cake!::
and you can Quote that^ shit.. but remember, I wrote that^ spit!!::
On a 56K, I slay pray like they unaware I choke chicken's in dismay!::
givin' NO thanks ta grace, I just want to say... I think ya signiture's GAY!!::
I'm racking points, subtracting vertabrae and collapsing on ya joints!::
smokin' ya points, B-LOW ya brain, and maim Quotients mainframe!!::
Cut his dingle-ling off, give it to a midgit!. besides they're used to short-shit!::
Admit it!! Bitch coppied my humor, piled into Quotient computer files!!::
my styles uncircumsized, like critics you go down on Boys in the Hood!::
ya toys wish they could, fuckin' faggots get Shanks Dirty good'n bloody!!::
Now I'm hurtin' everybody cause ya flow comes after a massive disastah!::
Comin' off gangsta? ya only pound crack cause you scout backs wangsta!!::
I'm tha croc master outback, shittin' in public wherevah tha crowd's at!::
Now that takes tha gravy , He's lightweight? dawg we used to call you baby!!::
No way you gonna rape me, maybe? nope sorry kidd, I'm not ya lady!::
My whole faculty spits iLL immaculate scripts, this craftily ripped his to bits!!::
Quotient Wack/Played "punches"::. . .
::. . And I'd say your sister is pretty man. . but fuck incest/
::. . I agree with your custom title man, Your verse was sharp as knives. . Butterknives/
::. . Let me make this shit even. . [blah blah blah blah blah] <-- see that line kid ? You can HAVE it !!/
(to many people end their battle with some kinda ending like this)
. . . As you can see Quotient had a much stronger verse . . . It seems like Dirty forgot that punches should be the main focus of any battle . . . Quotient had some nice punches but nothing that really made me say "Oh Shit" . . . good job tho y'all . . .
MY VOTE: Quotient