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Old 04-02-03, 01:19 PM   #9
varentao
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Okay, first off....this IS poetry...it's just better suited to be read out in an open mic night or something...

...but nonetheless, it IS poetry...

...okay, so the piece was simple...but had strong meaning behind it...depicting in a simple yet kind of vivid way A vicious circle...this being one of the many vicious circles within one big vicious of 'the ghetto'..even though it can be relevant in any sense (suburbs, countryside...anywhere)..

..so yeah, i dug this piece to an extent..


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