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Old 04-02-03, 05:12 PM   #9
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enigmatic won this easy (no offence to blunt) had good dlow and punches thru out most the verse

'Cause I got an illness that's lethal, and I can only spit verses tight//
Flame this cat, leave 'em marred and cooked, left with scars and shook//
'Cause like a drunken pro fisherman, i’m the best at bars and hooks//
This cat claim he's ill, but he’s nowhere close to sick


those lines were ill and u had a few others too
blunt u just need to use more word play etc and come a bit harder