***Fuck a fuckin homecoming dance theres more chance of finding of dick in your pants//11
as the crowd stands up and chants you choke quiker than a stangled band//12
I got the mic in my hand time to cut you up lyricly like i'm spittin out a lance//13
Move to the South of France they like cowards and you'll get a second chance//14
You wont get one here your time is up sit back down without shitting your pants//15

***Moving swiftly on to my next section where you'll recieve my verbal infection//16
its a deadly desease without an atedote injection//17
There is no protection you've already inhaled it now you've lost all direction//18
time to Hold your breath keep calm and wait for inpsection//19
as the judges come along and throw votes in this direction....



Those 2 verses still had odd lines lol . . .if you have 5 lines that rhyme try to come up with a 6th one so its easy . . .


also to both of you try to think more "outside the box", cause when u do that, and get good at it, thats when u come up with punches and wordplay that make people say "Oh Shit . . ."


just a suggestion . . .



I gotta give this battle to Chrit better wordplay and more mature punches . . .


Keep elevatin y'all . . .

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