yeah, um.... it was real good, but I don't no
you could of put this in the poetry thang
I could feel you.... but I personally didn't think it was the best
but you had hella good rhymes
but I thought it was kind of boring and long
that's just my opinion, I'm sure a lot of people would like this
but I didn't like it like a whole whole lot
but still it was good, or not bad, some lines were real tight though

oh yeah.... I'm gonna kill you soon, so look out

keep rhyme'in

I'm gonna read this again when I'm not so drunk some other time
it will probably be way different

alright?
love: chameleon.... I just say that because everyone does, haha!!!!!!

bye