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fgee has elevated a lot!
I felt a lot of your lines, sometimes stuff gets a little corny, but there's a clear element of cleverness that Blunt is lacking.
I felt fgee's flow MUCH more than Blunt's.
Blunt has some good lines, but a lot of the verse seems like filler. I mean... I know you like the gun talk, but people really don't like it, newbs maybe...
switch tha style.. check it out...//
I got no need for-four when I got a nine.//
cock back one line an' fire with the aim of a sniper ta pierce ya mind.//
you eva been ta jail.. let me guess.. NO, bitch I'm-a lifer.//
29 timer, more to come, I can kill anyone with nuthin' but one punch.//
there it was an' you laid tha fuck out! get tha fuck out.//
Just stuff like that is offputting as hell.
I wish I could get some more personals that would instantly help both of you.
Blunt, you've gotta take the shit talking less serious and think about hurting someone with your mind. There's no intimidation in F9s.
Vote=fgee. Mos def, it would be a tragedy if this ended in tie.
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