Dunno about this piece..

...has a certain amount of power than seems to come from a sad, downbeat overview (well kind of an overview...can't fidn rhe word for it funnily enough..)..

..also quite blunt at times, yet not toally disrupting the flow..

...i felt the ending was a bit too blunt though, maybe could've been better, it was in between like....

...and had other momens of 'iffiness' when it seemed to tail off...and usage of some vocab once or twice seemed a bit mis-placed..

..but overall, i likd it..

...respect..