... I crime of passion... lol... I liked it girl, I really did... there seems to be alot of heart put into this... alot of emotion... and you express it well with your words... deep
I was feeling the flow and vocab, good rhymes too...

I usually don't write rhymes like this... you know, emotional ones... but I'm posting one soon calld 'Broken', if you spot it, check it out... peace