everybody needs to understand this....the fact that i am getting slept on upsets me because creative feedback/tips for improvement are the main purpose for this forum, and this site in many ways. i dropped this verse on two other sites, one being the site where the league it was written for takes place, and on both sites i recieved responces from well respected text-heads saying it was the dopest, cleanest, most origonal piece that has been dropped topical wise in quite some time...
I aint sayin all of this to be a bitch in any, shape or form...im saying this to wake this fukin site up...
not to tute my own flute, but, this is a deep ass piece...and yall cant say shit except "yea i smoke so..."

give some good responces, creative criticizm, tips for improvement...shit, point out the parts that you liked...do what this site is about.