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I Am The Light
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Originally posted by varentao
Fairly alright piece...
...i mean okay, so maybe at times a bit too simplistic and sticking to ridigdlt to the rhyme scene..
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I agree i think the meaning was what kept this alive---I think that you know how to rhyme i just think you need to possibly expand to other original rhyme schemes but over all not bad
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