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Old 04-04-03, 08:23 PM   #7
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Scarface hit this pretty good with his topic. Everything was pretty much in running order on this piece but minor work could be made to improve this and tweek and tune it to make it better. Line length affects the flow as he said so yea, watch you syllable count. This was a nice piece and I was really feeling the topic since it is going right along with current events... good drop.

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